A very good description of what our country is in today. You have written an excellent poem that as said describes what our country is going through right now and how we are in turmoil. But anyway the poems flow was good as well as the rhyming. Good job and keep up the good work.

It begs to question are we really trying to help? If so, who exactly are we helping? If we care, we have a lot more to care about close to home.