When I bleed

by Laith   Apr 3, 2010


...When I Bleed

Victorious, my brother, I once was
But as the hope flies
And as the years pass
Only destiny holds your victory
Upon the dangerous road of mortality
That no one had succeeded to achieve
.....Just believe......The lies you receive,
Daily on the journey of death
Because our creation, from the start,
.......Is a myth
Victorious, my mother, I once believed,
That triumph lies on the palm of my hand
That these mountains would bow upon my strength
But what strength shall I have,
With a broken heart,
........Torn apart
Between the present and the past
Between the despair I once lived
And all the love I now give,
Which I do not understand
Oh, mother, take my hand
Show me a glimpse of what I'd be
Maybe, only when there's seeing,
It won't be hard on my being
To fight, love, and succeed
Maybe then I won't feel pain,
..........When I bleed.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Laith

    Thank you very much.. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by isabel

    A really wonderful poem.
    Well depicted, with a good flow and very touching... :)

    *keep on*
    Isabel