Raj, you met the tag challenge very well. This is sad and you can feel that sadness in the words you wrote. Good job.

Wow The imagery and the emotion was excellent in this poem and I loved it. You did a good job with the Tag challenge. Good job and keep writing.

What sadness you have portrayed with your words; I thought you really met the challenge. It's nice we are given these challenges, it only helps us grow as a writer. Awesome work Raj. :]

That's so sad and it seems so real. I love how emotional this was and how I could connect with you in this piece. Very amazing job dear. I think you did a great job here. Loved it. Nik

That is a terrible moment to go through as well
as to live with..a very painful moment you have
written about..a sad read that is well written.