Once again a very simple and creative piece that just shines with beauty :] Very sweet poem that made me smile. Lovely work as always Nik

Meena
What a lovely piece.

The beauty of a smile
glitter like stars
and guides you into
hope's embrace

A simple smile can change someones day.
Great job!
Love Cindy

It's beautiful sunset
that sedates the mind
where thoughts flower
of new beginings

Meena, what a refreshing piece beutifully penned...Every stanza is as beautiful as the other, but this one captures my attention as a smile can go a long way.Lives can begin with a smile.
Beautiful and a joy to read.
Paul...

Really nice poem, I like it, I especially like the first stanza, its a great opener. Very well written!

Very nice but I think the wording could have been a little better.

This is a very tender piece..that truly made me smile..and wen i read the 1st stanza..felt my heart really freshed as i smile..gave me a new image
for smillig
or definition.

it flowed in an amazing way..all the thoughts u had been related..i believe u knew what u was writing..

amazing job
flawless one

A smile brings in
waves of comfort
the breath of relief
which bathes your world
^^^
...aint u just amazing

5/5

A smile is something that costs nothing to give but could feel like a million dollars to someone who is feeling a little down.

Very good word choice in this lovely verse.

I do agree with you dear...You just gave me a smile through this beautiful poetry...God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

Wow, What a beautifully descriptive analogy of a smile , I really enjoyed this one .
I also liked how it showed the progression of a smiles cause & effect , reading like a little mini story . Very well written definately a 5/5
Grant Gilbert & I co wrote one about passing a smile along titled :--Climb On Board

You have described the quality of a smile just beautifully. 5/5

You have described the quality of a smile just beautifully. 5/5