Comments : Imaginary Place.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lynn Anderson

    Great imagery! Beautiful!

  • 8 years ago

    by Danny


    I was there. Great description and good metaphor's.


  • 8 years ago

    by Veamm


    Base on the comments below. I wonder why they only said few words even though this piece is so wonderful. It has so many beautiful thoughts and imagery. Another well penned piece.

    In a place far away from real
    A wondrous place sound and surreal
    I'm so far away not wanting to return
    To the endless winter...

    First of all, This is a dream for dreamers that doesn't want to return into reality. Dreaming is a wonderful gift. It gives a person something to believe in and a thing to create a passion for them to achieve.

    In this place the sunflowers turn to bask in sunlight
    Sounds of shallow creeks like shear delight
    Flowers in bloom, winter is now faded
    Every things at peace now, sorrow is eliminated.

    This stanza is all about the changing pace of the place/dream. And, How the bad things turn into something wonderful.

    I lay down upon the bank, relaxing with a sigh
    And stare deeply into my Imaginary Sky
    A endless blue with small puff's of white
    Wanting to be a bird so I could take flight

    This stanza is all about the tranquility and peacefulness of the dream and the beauty of the dream. And what kind of dream it is. Well done.

    Keep writing.
    I like your vocabulary.
    Another 5 for me