Vivid images and nice thoughts are generated by these words. Well done.

I am with Sylvia in this is a poem of very vivid imagery. The words portray many things and were chosen well. Good job and keep writing.

Thanks for your kind words. Just some thoughts that came to me at one of my 'inspiration' places.

Thanks for your kind comment, Billy Rob!

The vocabulary and imagery is breath taking

Excellent word choice and imagery! What a beautifully penned piece!

Thank you, Rachel and Michael!

I created a youtube video for this poem. The address is http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jIVrrhLO6Y8 if you want to check it out!