I hope someday that all we will see from you are happy upbeat poems.

The pain of missing someone... the sad goodbyes... makes us feel as if the pain would never end... but then life goes on...
beautifully expressed... well written...

A very well written poem. The sadness in this piece is quite moving. I could feel the writer pouring their heart into the poem as you have done. Good job and keep writing.

This feeling is something I can definitely relate to, I thought you did a flawless job on this stanza -

There was no wonder to the sky
once the stars shut down and the
moon covered up it's glow. The
atmosphere grew thick with
violence and choked me into
a cationic state of depression
and left me to linger in the past.

Awesome job..(:

Speechless. All i can say is i'm giving this an unhesitant 5.

"I know saying it over and over
won't bring you back, but it
lets me know you existed."
i loved this part. i could relate in a way.
great poem

Great poem hope you win that contest.