I like the rhythm and the rhyming isn't forced. A thought provoking piece.

Congrats on your win :)
Take care
Cindy

Love this :)

Definitely heartbreaking but you have written such thoughtful words in a short, well-flowing time. Well worth the reader and congratulations on the win, very much deserved for you have spoken a lot in a few. God bless you always.

~MaryAnne

Great write it looks like you been writing poems for some time now and they are quite profound. Honestly, you don't need another pat on the back from me; I take it you already know how good you really are. ;)

Simple.. but full of feelings.. few words but had expressed everything ^_^

Love doesn't give up on anyone my dear,love this write :'D

I liked the poem for the simplicity but was still searching for more. A good poem but not all that excellent to me, I believe I've seen something a lot better from you; maybe you're just experimenting with a new style but I was expecting some more with some metaphors or stronger language in it. Don't want to seem like the negative comment on here, I like your poem and the way it flowed so smoothly, I just wish I could have read something more intriguing. Just my thoughts of course.

Great peom , emotional & meaningful ...
Congratulations on your win , you really worth it .
wonderful job 5/5