I agree the emotion is so easy felt, you are quite impressive with form poetry..not sure how you do it. Great job!

Brings old memories forth quite nicely, the pain of unrequited or lost love. Nicely expressed:)

Raj
I love reading your verses. This is no exception. So much sadness.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

This poem reveals so much sadness u knw...like this bitter feelings we have wen we lose someone ...without final or worth it goodbye..

i loved ur expressions and how u worded wats deep inside... and this was my fav..was ur strongest stanza

Eternity ceased to exist.
Forever, lost in myriad
fragments of dreams,
scattered across
timeless void.

very welll
5/5:)

Beautiful as always :). I loved the first stanza. My favorite but I felt this was a well penned poem dear. Lovely :) Nik

Each verse is written beautifully with vivid images. From start to end this poem is captivating..filled w5th sadness.