Just tell me which line am i supposed to choose to be my fav ????

just realy an amazing reading..what a deep DESCRIPTIVE..IMAGE_FUL poem ...

waw...i was so impresssed esp..how u ended it,,,u brought me down surface.

sucha flowing well brilliant work
just
love it
5/5

Honestly I had no idea who Pegasus was, maybe that's really sad on my part lol but I know now...kind of made the poem more interesting for me personally cause I had to look it up. If I were to suggest something take out 'is' between mouth & dry you don't need it.. just take that out and put a comma after dry to separate your thoughts. I really love love love the title, it fits the poem perfectly in my opinion, you feel all these feelings of love, & then at the end you are no longer unspoken, you speak the words of which you feel & those are I love you...beautifully written.

Anthony
Ahhhhh...those wonderful feelings of love...get you everytime.
Great job!
Take care
Cindy

This was quite enchanting. You described the anticipation of uttering these three words for the first time incredibly well here. Enjoyed it.

Great poem!

Excellent lines~

last defenses are dropped, fight is over
I concede my fate to say, I love you.

Very emotional! 5/5!

Ray