Passionate..
tender
lovely
expressed deeply
i love it Jim really

5/5

A very tender write. It had just the right ingredients to make a beautiful verse. Passionate without being overdone. I enjoyed this one.

Such a sweet, soft and an alluring sensual
write! Very nicely penned!

Woh.. passionate, beautiful, sensational! :) A great write.. I loved it :))

Well Done Jim !

This is so beautiful. I've read a few of your poems and this one is so amazingly lovely to read. It is perfect.