Theres A difference

by iRobbiee   Aug 26, 2010


Theres a difference in being
Unsure of loving someone
Than play with someone's
Feelings.
Breaking up with someone
For someone else isnt love to me.
Telling people no
To be with the person you love
Is worth doing it for YOU

I know I love you
I might be a little confused at times
I know that I might complain
About the most stupidest things.
But when it comes to you
Your everything to me
Meaning your the hearache too.,

You hurt me while not even trying,
Sometimes you make me feel,
Like yu don't care if im
crying,
Its hard to deal with this,
When it feels like your
real close to dying,

But I know I can't change that,
Because that's how its always going to feel

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  • 13 years ago

    by iRobbiee

    Thank you, no I did not take it offensivee I am looking for things like that.. I wrote that when I was 14 im trying to get better with that though thank you very much

  • 13 years ago

    by Spirit

    To be honest this was an ok poem.
    Your ideas are good and they show atrong poetic ability, but I got lost in your lack of grammer.
    Now I'm usually the peoson who comments on a poets lack of periods/commas, but with this type of poem I believe that it is needed.
    I really like the short, simple, and to the point style that you put into your poem.
    A lot of authors now-a-days (not just poets) tend to forget that writting is a way to share a message, you didn't forget.
    Please don't take this comment too hard because in the end it doesn't matter if I love your poem or not. All that matters is that you love your poem.
    Thank you for the read.
    >~Spirit~>

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