Sea spray stinging my face
wispy silhouette beyond the surf
timeless beauty beheld in my gaze,
a siren no doubt luring me out to sea
wading spellbound into the crashing waves

*I loved these few lines soo much. I think this is my favorite poem by you. I loved the way it was written. It flowed so well and kept me interested the whole time. I loved the diction and the imagery. Everything was really beautiful and left me speechless. A wonderful poem. Great work. Nik*

This was a very good poem. You had good imagery and emotion in this piece. Also The stanza Nik mention is my favorite out of this piece as well. Good job and keep writing.

Another beautiful poem Anthony :)
Wonderful imagery. The picture you have painted for the reader is awesome.
Great job!
Take Care
Cindy

Amazing piece..u have such a deep insight..u wrote this from the beats of the beats and i was just touched by the sweetness

allow me to choose my fav lines

her soul journeys to me in return,
Neptune slides beneath the surface
broad smile painted upon his face.

u have it...u got the talent !!
5/5

Aww this poem is really cool : )

Another lovely verse from you. So may beautiful lines that I could not pick one as a favourite, they all blend so well together. Nicely done.

Wow, great use of language and mythology. I was captivated from start to finish. I love the use of Neptunes tridant. You have created a wonderful piece. Congrats.