1st..ut title is perfect regarding the concept of ur poem..

events like this id not even imagine a happier poem.. this is sad witht its lines...images..expressions and whole concept

but one thing to smile about
u expressed it
perfectly amazing
5/5

I wrote this poem at the request of three publishers I know. Each of them generated books and sold them with all proceeds going to the Haiti Relief Fund. I can't mention the books or publishers here but I feel honored to have been given this opportunity and honored that you read it and appreciated as well

pray for them
ron

Ron
It was hard to read this without crying. You have put so much emotion into this piece. Your words paint such a vivid picture for the mind.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Cindy

By writing this you have brought the despair and sadness of so many orphaned children to
this site which will be read by many..a moving write..take care.