Comments : Last Chance Hotel

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Wow..what was his exactly about..i did understand it completely what i mean.if its true..

    i thing ur wording was perfect..i havent felt one word forced..and actually was pretty sad.

    They just walk by
    turning their heads,
    pretending
    not to see.
    >>> this would be pretty common u knw..its what most ppl would do as long as u need them..well done..nicely said

    Street life is unforgiving,
    >>definitely ..i so looove the
    expression...

    Memories dont help here,
    or places where Ive been.
    >>never..how logical and wise..
    U keep on impressing me...is there
    anything that you dont knw how to write !

    well im glad
    :)
    5/5
    I loved this one as well

  • 13 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Hey Jeff and Sun Shine, yeah this is a true life story of me ...... when I drink I suffer, Jeff I think since you are a friend of Bill W. you understand. Thank God I haven't had to suffer for some many years now. Thanks guys for reading and commenting

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Life can be cold & cruel and it takes a kind hearted person to open their door to help another soul..take care.