A good poem about going to a church and getting help from someone. A touching write. Good job and keep writing.

Hey Jad,

Yes it is about baptism being only the first step in the "washing"/forgiveness. Then remaining in what ever faith is the "rinising".
I myself am not a very religous man. My parents and grandparents were. I believe religion are for those who do not want to go to Hell, Spirituality is for those who do not want to go back....

A well written piece...i love the idea of personal experiences..they are expressed so well
and i think u did a gd job narrating this in a lyrical way

5/5