JAd...a flowing poem..with gd expressions..and very deep lines...
I loved how ur feelings been penned so well over this.. but it is realy a sad poem

i do love sad poems but i hope u right a happy one just as gd as this.

gr8..keep going
5.5

Jad, this to shall pass ...... good poem of baring the brunt of feelings and emotions,
thanks for sharing

Some of the grammar is a little off and periods seem to be used for style's sake but without regard for sentence structure. Other than that, I like the "Suffering isn't enough?" insertion. It struck me as curious and different - good things. I also like that you used the word "mountainous!" Very nice.

A good write overall.

Veryy well done..congratulations..and this proves what I said for u last night in the club chatting thread last night haha

gr888888 job

It feels like one is caught in a whirlwind of
emotion..good choice of words where feelings
are poured out..congrats on the win!

This poem touches me so much. It's being a while that i havn't red a poem and before the end i had to take a pause to savor the beauty of such a sad , love poem like this. We all feels emotions, but not most of us could put it in words like you do. Very, very well done. Keep it up, kel.

Well done!
strong and deep words