I am nothing with out you

by EmoLoverShelby   Sep 4, 2010


I sit alone thinking of you, I remember the kisses I lost and the days you were mine. Slowly I take the blade to my neck, reminding myself of how I am nothing without you. With bloody hands I take the blade and end my life!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Sounds like some short thoughts you had swirling in your mind, hopefully soon you'll be able to put them into stanzas & expand on your feelings with more description, if you ever need any help just let me know! It's a nice start.

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I like the idea of it
    I think that you could
    use more imagery
    explain a little more
    Detail it. I know how it is.
    To want to end my life because I am nothing
    without the love of my life. I'd do anything. I'd want to free him but I know I can't. But yeah detail it and it will be super.

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