Im so glad u posted a poem..I daily check the posted poem by out club members and I doubt from a short while u submitted..a poem..since ur name sounds new for me

and while I was reading I was really surprised, because this poem with its sad gray mode..with its perfect expressions...deep wording.
and just amazing flow
impressed me

and u no bet have to write soon another
ill be 1st to check
5/5
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Outstanding NF !!!

Great rhyme, flow, meter all there. Its truly hard to let go on some many levels. I enjoyed reading this , thanks for sharing

I love it because im going thru those things. I hope to get to read more of your poems soon.

5/5

Randy
I feel your pain in every word you have penned. Though this is so sad there is also beauty held within. Your love for the person you left. Glad you're back :)
Awesome job!
Love Cindy

Thank you for all your kind comments. I recently moved back to my hometown and left behind a good friend in Florida. My feelings about this inspred this poem.

Letting go of something so dear is not only
difficult but painful as well & that pain is felt in
each of your lines..a touching write..take care.

This is beautiful 5/5

I particularly really liked the flow of this poem
It rhymed so well and the syllable's and the rhythm.....PERFECT

not to mention the way you explained your topic
You are now on my favorites list.

WOW is all i can say this flow was amazing i just love it the last two lines are way awesome and your words painted a picture in my head this piece was very well done its going in my favorits well done