It left a puddle in my heart
and removed my chains

Like unlocking you from the cell of frustration
as it leaves behing remains of its memories;
nice title..a mellow read..take care.

I enjoyed reading throguh this poem, my emotions were caught up in it the whole way. Very well written.

What a remarkable poem you have written for us to see. The imagery and emotions of tranquility could so easily be felt by the reader as he got captivated by your great introduction.

"The soft rain gently flows
down from heaven
masking my sorrow"

The first three lines were by far my favorite part of this poem. Good descriptions and flow made this a really good piece. The transition from sorrow to being at peace in mind was wonderfully portrayed as well. Good job and keep writing.

Wow!!! I mean that is all I have to say is wow!! This poem was just amazing, I mean just flawless!! Loved the entire thing so much I am at a loss for words!! Really great job with this one! :) 5/5