HaHaHa... this is Hilarious and very well written. Goodstuff Ronald. And thanks for the laugh :D... Keep penning! Lol, Olwin.

Lol, Very funny and at the same time cleverly written. Good job on the rhyme scheme. Keep it up!

LOOOOOOOOOOOL hahahaahahaha
u are a smart funny one.!!!
lol it was even rhyming in a very flawless way

5/5