I think now i understand why you told me u love nature poems..u master it !!'
such an amazing creative tanka with triple verses !

I just love it..fasinated i was by the expressions u penned down..and this was my fav part

A breath of new air,
Lasting hopes born now anew.
Sprouting in our lives,
Full of Love, Peace, and Kindness.
Oh! My heart couldn't want more.

>>its jst sooooo refreshing..
amazing !

5/5

I thought you did a great job with this poem. It was alive with vision and emotion. What a talent you have, keep it going. Enjoyable read

Spring does bring a new breath of fresh air,
making everything around feel brand new :)
Good job with this form!

You are a wonderful influence to have on this site. I love the imagery you present us here.
A guide thorugh the stages of life to a certain extent; i felt like being born, growing up, and bringing new life to the world were my thoughts as I read though the stanzas.

Thanks for sharing, 'Tanka' is on my list to try out.

Keep writing, I look forward to exploring your poems.