Wow...Im speachless. I dont know what to say exactly. There is soooo much emotion in this poem, its exotic and freewilling. its great! i love it. lol good work, i dont normally read poems by men but im glad i did this one, you're going into my favorites!!!!
11 years ago
This was very very well penned. I enjoyed it immensely. I think you did an amazing job with your word choice, there were a few lines in here which really blew me away. Lovely rhyming as well - it didnt seem forced and the flow was great. Overall a very amazing and enjoyable read. KUDOS