Comments : An Ephemeral Dream

  • 11 years ago

    by Simikiel

    This poem is amazing

    I hear a cry so poetic,
    like a melody of elegy.
    its so pure; no its pathetic.
    its the end; yes the end of me

    this is my favorite part its so emotional!!! keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    Wow...Im speachless. I dont know what to say exactly. There is soooo much emotion in this poem, its exotic and freewilling. its great! i love it. lol good work, i dont normally read poems by men but im glad i did this one, you're going into my favorites!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by chind

    This was very very well penned. I enjoyed it immensely. I think you did an amazing job with your word choice, there were a few lines in here which really blew me away. Lovely rhyming as well - it didnt seem forced and the flow was great. Overall a very amazing and enjoyable read. KUDOS

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I am impressed with your word choice. I feel this ia a beatiful poem..very romantic