Tlk

by greemq   Sep 21, 2010


When i was looking for you. nothing i found, dead ends no matter where i began. lonely it felt to look and find nothing. nothing but a shadow, a ghost, a voice in the wind. couldnt here what you said.

but now i could just imagine, that it could here! here! i have been here in front of you. you been looking for me. but who are u? how do i know it you? answer me that question?

why now? did you hear me call you? i was there in the field yelling who are you? tell me who are you? are you her? where you there or was i talkin to you? how do i know. wen was the search blind to me?

hello? hello? answer me? i need to know. do i stop looking now. when will you give me the answer i need. tell me tell me..dont leave.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    It's an interesting piece, may I make a suggestion though? Try to write a poem from your heart and soul, not just your mind, put your feelings into the poem and you'll captivate readers every time, remember, poetry is about self expression, not stringing words together to sound clever

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