by greemq Sep 21, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
When i was looking for you. nothing i found, dead ends no matter where i began. lonely it felt to look and find nothing. nothing but a shadow, a ghost, a voice in the wind. couldnt here what you said. |
It's an interesting piece, may I make a suggestion though? Try to write a poem from your heart and soul, not just your mind, put your feelings into the poem and you'll captivate readers every time, remember, poetry is about self expression, not stringing words together to sound clever |