Comments : I beckon to you

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    A standard love poem. Many feelings of love scattered across the few lines you have written for us to read. The message was quick ans short and to the point. Good job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    It sounds like the perfect place for a lady to be, safe and warm with someone that cares. Feelings explode, simply and silently in this poem. Good job

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    An invite to love and all the comforts that comes with it..sweet little write :)