My surreal wishes

by ericbow   Sep 26, 2010


To all of my wishes that
I'd prayed for the most to come true.
Is the one that I could be able to shape my feelings,
That can be tangible enough to renew.

So that all the heartaches and
Bitterness that I felt before.
Could be easily erase, because, I still have the bruise and sore

And if that wish of mine
Will be granted by our good god.
I hope that he would give me a bonus,
so that I can no longer be sad.

Oh, how I wish that a pain receptor
Is on his list already.
Because, that would be my request to
Cushion my heart that is always unsteady.

Because, if the next time that I will got hurt
by loving someone.
I could easily recover to find the right one

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  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    That was an incredibly beautiful write. I liked how this poem was about a thought, it feels nice to be able to connect with other people in their thinking. It makes us feel much less alone, and reminds us that everyone has hopes, dreams, and wishes. Well done, 5/5!