The Fire Queen

by Daisy   Oct 5, 2010


Her eyes burnt trees to timbers
Her hair was flaming fire
Her heart was trapped in a cage
Her fingers flew sparks
Her lips uttered burning words
Her feet danced above the ruins
Her voice was harsh and raw.

She skipped on sparks
She laughed at the stars heat
She was a burning star
She thought about those little lights

The remains of the Fire Queen's soul.

This is basically my first poem for almost two years (I am now thirteen).

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  • 13 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Daisy-

    I first started writing at 13... and I have to say, this piece is wonderful.... You go girl!!!

    You have used words to describe the fire queen to a tee.... I loved this poem!! well done ~

  • 13 years ago

    by ronel mccarthy

    Love the imagery-words gel nicely with the title. Well done

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