Comments : Three Lock Box

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    A pretty descent poem to say the least, the only thing I wasn't too found of was the rhyming as it seemed forced in places but other then that a fair poem of how we all have dark secrets that we keep inside, locked away where no one can ever see it. Good job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    One lie grows into another lie and it keeps
    getting bigger just to hide a truth..
    A deep poem leaving the reader to think..take care.

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    We all have a box like this hidden from everyone but ourselves. Well penned ,