Very interesting format here with vivid imagery. Am amazed at all the myriad forms of poems there are.

Sylvia,

Well done, I was not aware of such a style as this. I must say that while reading I had to stop and ask, Didn't she say this already ?
Once I read the explaination at the end it made sense. Thanks for sharing

Very nice, Sylvia. I was impressed with how well you were able to get this poem out and how it did seemingly flow like a cascade. Your word choice was great as well as your flow and the imagery was really good. I could see everything clearly. So once again great job and keep writing.

I love this poem so much! :) Can really feel the storm brewing.
Excellent Sylvia!

P.S Love this form too :]

//howling winds, mimicking emotions as
black clouds saturate a murky grey sky.
// wonderfully penned verses

This was a clever write. loved how the emotions are described as murky grey sky

congratz on the win. You did a great job on
form... its new to me so will try it out :)

You have done well with this form and each
verse flows straight into the next one and I also like the images your word brings...good job!