Night time can be scary for us all. Olwin you have done a very good job with this, the message as well as the form.

Great poem Olwin, This one is simply amazing Everything about it was perfect , I'll be coming back to read this on occaision
5/5...Jim

Thanks so much everyone for the kind comments :) Lol.

Fears of childhood can still haunt later on... I hope you have come over it :)
wonderfully penned.
//Unseen creatures whisper in my ear;
those that claim the fearful of the night.
// loved these lines .... coz I am still scared of ghosts :P

enjoyed reading

Well done with this form Olwin!! The topic about darkness was well potrayed here..liked
the read :)