Comments : Elixir of love

  • 11 years ago

    by Jad

    What a heartfelt piece you have put up for us and I was really amazed on how good this poem actually was though it is not in a set pattern to say or plot. Anyway you have poured your emotions out on this poem and the power of it is overwhelming and I really was drawn in by this pull you present in this poem. There were also parts that were somewhat descriptive and that was good as well. The only things I didn't like about this poem was it really not being in a more strict stanza but I know that couldn't be help from the way you wrote this poem. Anyway you did a great job. Great job and keep writing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Full of passion and emotion, like a letter to your loved one.

  • 11 years ago

    by TowerDreamer

    A spellbinding poem of such beauty that captures the essence of being completely in love with someone. Magical!

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Write of Love, Kel. Excellent!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An excellent piece of writing. Very emotive.