What a heartfelt piece you have put up for us and I was really amazed on how good this poem actually was though it is not in a set pattern to say or plot. Anyway you have poured your emotions out on this poem and the power of it is overwhelming and I really was drawn in by this pull you present in this poem. There were also parts that were somewhat descriptive and that was good as well. The only things I didn't like about this poem was it really not being in a more strict stanza but I know that couldn't be help from the way you wrote this poem. Anyway you did a great job. Great job and keep writing.