Comments : The End is Near(Rispetto)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    The transition of one season to another is like a death to one, birth to the next. You have done well with winter leaving and spring arriving giving us images of flowers amongst the remaining snows. Good job.

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    Very very lovely work! im not a big fan of poems about nature, but you made this one very enjoyable to read. Once again, amazing imagery! well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A Wonderful Rispetto Austin, with great rhyme and meter :) Loved the winter theme :]
    Have never heard of a Heroic Rispetto before! Now you've given me something to muse upon ! HaHa. Thankuu :)

    ... ( Im away to look up the form! HaHa)

    Keep penning your Marvellous writes :]

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nicely done. I commend your talent and ability to try new forms. The makings of a great poet

  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Never seen this form before but like always you did a wonderful job with it. Very lovely images :] nice work Aussy. Nik

  • 13 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wonderfully portrayed, such an impressive and beautiful form you have united with here. I relished the seasonal theme and your ability to leave the reader somewhat awed in every way.

    God bless you and take care.

    MaryAnne

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You're so good at nature poems, another wonderful write from you. You always do an excellent job of portraying the seasons through your words, a nice glimpse of spring here.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Because of the iambic pentameter this seemed a little forced, when read out loud, but nevertheless you did very well on this!

    while the ever biting wind blows:
    spring breathes again ready to mold

    ^^
    I like how you personify the seasons, it gives such a fairy- tale like touch to your poem.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like how you set the picture of winter's feel and bringing back a fresh breath of spring into the read..I like that transformation..well done with the form!!