This is so beautiful. It really speaks to me. I especially like how it is so bold and then ends with a bit of longing. Very nice. Here's to being surrounded with light!

Ben, you may have used a tarot card for the inspiration but your words make the reader feel the love a person feels from another. Full of emotion. Well done.

Very simple and beautiful. Nice work dear :] Nik

Like a seed in the ground I felt like warmth and light had awakened my soul; giving me the strength to push upward...like a blade of grass emerging. Thank you for taking me there!

Simple with out the complex cliche"s nice piece of poetry

BBBBBBBBBBEEEEEEENNNNNNN
I loved it...amazing word choice..
very deeeep deep poetic wording.

I love the ending so so much..and ur opening lines had this..uumm what to call ? CATCHY..tone..

loved this one..as much as i love al u work..

sweet love..five out of five!

The inspiration may have come from a card,
but your words are beautifully put together
brining out the beauty of one who is in love..liked the read!