This time will be immortalized
In my mind, flesh
On paper and canvas
Like all great moments in time

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That was my favorite part,really makes it clear that it wiil last forever.
Welll done!

Your poem, is pretty thought-provoking .
Deep, insightful and ur word choice is really profound.

I love poems under this section, and I think you really did a very excellent job.

I love the message behind it, the tenderness of the words, and the instructive tone.
pretty impressing.

Keep the gr8 work .
5/5

Thank you 5/5

I enjoyed the lay out of this piece. It's written well and I like the smoothness of the flow and the concept of the words. An excellent write.

Danika
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