:) when you are in love everything around you reminds you of that person..a nice read.

Well done, again seems a little forced.

"The stars up in the sky,
they remind me of you.
So perfect and shining,
if only you knew."

With this stanza, "If only you knew" doesn't seem to fit, what should he know?

aside from that, good job:)

Jessie

Simply pure and amazing. I loved it so much.
Keep writing! I give it a 5/5 !

Kisses!
-Hannah

Thank you.(: