JAD...you have such a creative mind..I so loved the whole poem.
The emotions in it, and the relation between our thoughts.
Was really my pleasure, thank you for going along with my idea.. you rock XD

5/5 SURe haha

Haven't seen the film but the poem seems to fit the description and for the most part, it is difficult to tell who wrote the lines. There are some lines that seem out of place, no tie in to the line before or after. Some other rough spots close to the end of the poem. These few things affect the flow of the poem for me.

After the changes, the flow is good, the lines all fit together for me personally. I hope others feel the same way because it is a very good representation of the idea for the poem, full of emotion and feelings one might have under the circumstances.

I absolutely LOVE this movie, what an interesting poem. I now want to go out & buy the movie so I can watch it again. Its amazing the lives he touched in that movie...especially being strangers to him. This poem was so full of emotion - you both did a wonderful job. I loved the inspiration.

A collab is tough, two minds, different thoughts and ideas but I think this was done fairly well, a little ragged in spots and didn't blend as easily as it could have, but over all I thought it was a nice piece of work

This poem magnifies the fine line between the literal heart and the abstract so beautifully

This almost made me want to bring out my box of tissues and cry. Very beautiful, very sad piece. A well crafted write.

"I awake to the sound of your voice,
though you're gone but you still live on inside me. "
- these two lines are just perfect.

I absolutely loved this piece, beautiful work people!