An inventive way to say goodbye to someone and it sad. When we say these words, I wonder if they are meant or if we are just putting on a brave front for the one we love.

Really different origninal , done with imagination . I liked it though it said much as others the same you gave it a twist. Good job

This was truly a sad poem that gave a good summary of it is and what one feels when they bid farewell. I loved the emotion that you put into this piece and also the many different perspectives one could take this poem as. Great job and keep writing.

A very sad goodbye said in a very different way...short yet it holds much depth..touching.