This is a new and interesting form and the
poem itself is strong with vivid images! Well done with this form as well as the write..might have to try this sometime!

A sad, long story. The betrayal of Christ is so evident in this piece and I love how you were able to implement it into every verse that you wrote. On a side not, I really like the form that you use but to be frank I don't think I will every try it as I don't like the structure that it leaves the poem in. You did a fine job and I am impressed on how well you were able to do. Many emotions can be gotten from this piece such as hatred, betrayal, and sorrow. I love every bit of it. Great job and keep writing.

Betrayal is the most vicious of all the acts of man.
A lot of thought and knowledge went into this amazing write

Betrayal is the most vicious of all the acts of man.
A lot of thought and knowledge went into this amazing write

Wow, Sylvia! i've never heard of this form! very interesting.

this verse in particular is wonderful; i love the line, 'spend it well, my friend' is casually slipped into the verse, making it sear the one who is guilty.

great work!!

What a nice format, it has much power and indeed the bible has many truths in it..Judas still lives on in all those who sell a friend to save either their own skin or that of their next of kin. How true.

Worthy of a nomination.

5/5 Ingrid

Sylvia
Great job on the form. It's so sad we have to experience this from people we thought were our friends and trusted. Yet they go on like nothing ever happened. Eventually the truth will shine a light on them and they will have to pay for everythng they have done.
Take care
Cindy

This form is a very interesting one; great job on making another flawless poem. It's sad what people will do for money and how easily they will break trust without considering the consequences of their actions.
5/5

This isn't a form of writting that I have come across before so it is a little new to me still I found it rather interesting and I felt your poem did the from justice. I agree with what cindy above me has said about people we thought we could trust

5/5