Written with great skill from the heart

Oh. :( This one saddened me, because it is so, so very true. If you do not try you will never succeed.
Carpe Diem my friend. :)

Learned--learnt

'Don't let amazing in your life,
Without giving amazing back!
Don't ever think their trying,
is a happy one way track.'

This is the only part I did not like. 'Amazing' didn't work for me. Consider revision.
Overall, still a good read. Keep writing :)
-X

Written from the heart with true emotions. We must really cling to something good we have or we risk losing it. I must also say that the endng was amazing.