Me and you against the world baby,
Connected internally by silken threads of love,

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I just watched Titanic again for the first time in a while and those lines totally reminded me of it. Especially the "You and me against the world baby." Cause they literally were taking on part of the world. Haha

An instinctual adoration,
Which began before you existed.

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I don't know. This part is very interesting if a little stalkerish. I like it.

Though I can't always save you,
I will never leave you.

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I love these words sooooo much. I think this is what most people crave from love. They want to think that no matter how bad they mess up, the person they love will always stick by them and never leave them. Lovely lovely words. Perhaps my favorite in the whole poem.

By your side unconditionally,
Mother to child,
None, save death, could keep me from you,
The truest love known.

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Haha. Now I feel stupid. All this time I was thinking it was a romantic love, but it's the love between a mother and a child. This very last stanza makes the whole poem make sense and I love that. It's like a little surprise at the end. :]

Great job!

Cayce

I love how it kinda starts like a love poem,like you know..between two people... But then the twist that its a mothers love.. Things like this always get me teary for these are all the things,I don't feel with my mom,great job though... Beautiful.