Comments : Grown-Ups

  • 13 years ago

    by Lori

    Beautiful :) I loved it. Great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lost Innocence

    Very nice.....well put together too:D

  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    I lreally like it
    nice write

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    Really an interesting and cool poem. The ebb and flow of life as we travel thru to destinations known or unknown

    well written