It's like forgeting the whole world and let the smile flow from the heart! Liked the form as well as the read..good job!

A nice form and this poem was full of a really good message. The flow was good and went form the first stanza to the second without interruption. The structure was good as well. There were some emotions in this poem, which gave life to the poem. All in all, this was a true poem from the heart and I found it very heart filled. Great job and keep writing. :]

Raj
Beautifuly done :) Reading this left a smile on my face. Very uplifing piece.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

I agree with cindy about this being an uplifting piece I really got into this poem enjoyed it a lot.

I really liked the title of the poem too

5/5