Your words took the reader into the nightmare you were having. The image of evil came to mind in the first verse, no warmth in his smile, a handsome face etched in stone. Relief when you wake, something we all feel as we realize it was nothing but a nightmare and then to see the white rose with blood droplets, I am not sure I would want to sleep again. Well done.

Not only am I Thanking you for your kind words on my work, but Im also Congratulating you on a great work of poetry. You give a very well slam poetry drive and your words are immaculate. You my friend are a very good writer

P.S Nice to see someone else from NC

Not only am I Thanking you for your kind words on my work, but Im also Congratulating you on a great work of poetry. You give a very well slam poetry drive and your words are immaculate. You my friend are a very good writer

P.S Nice to see someone else from NC

I love the descriptors and verbage. The poem definitely has feeling versus just being plain. As far as criticism goes, i think you may be teetering on the verge of a story vs poem as I often do. Also, I would find a way to delineate what was written on the note and what is your text. Maybe like this: ... note, "See you in your dreams" Very good read!

We are often transported to a different place both awake and asleep. An enjoyable read

Wonderfully Written, An Excellent, Eloquent, Dark Write!!!