I left the criticism from above and I have come to praise your awesomeness! This poem was beautiful and the message was what really got me. It was very deep and I could sense it in all the lines. You seem to have been able to hold it throughout the poem which is very hard to do. The poem itself was really good with its flow. As it didn't break up any parts making it hard to read and also the imagery in this piece was stunning. It was as if you had drawn the images with your words and creatively placed them into your poem.

"Seeking light that's emerging through
knowledge,an ultimate devotion for
words."

I don't know why but this really stood out to me. I liked tremendously the last part about the devotion for words. What a great word choice. Also it is true that we see more once we learn more but we also realize how much we don't know when we learn more.

In all I thought this to be a really good poem that held a message that one could easily see and that so many can also relate to. Once again thank you for the wonderful read and I can't wait to see what you put out next. Great job and keep writing.

This was really good

Nicely Penned!!!

..you words continue to give gem-encrusted evidence that you
are a deep and darling and conscientiously
spiritual young woman..

I hear you have a baby...how fortunate that
this baby came to you..
may you always lift each other up with
poetically musical heartfelt
rhythm, ritual, and reverence..

..I am quite touched by this poetic gem..