Temps, this poem is heartbreaking to read and I know it must be hard to cope with this. I can only tell you to carry on. Emotions are spilling out of this piece and I am taken away with your descriptions and also your deep sadness you poured into each line. The flow was right on and it went from line to line with easiness and kept the message going right along with it. Still I find there is this re-occuring pain in the lines which adds to the intensity of the poem and I am completely taken away by it.

All in all, I found this to be a very emotional piece with a true and sad message ingraved into it. I also like how descriptive you are in such a short piece. You have taken me away with yet another one of your amazing poems. Great job and keep writing.

I liked this, a lot. Not gonna get all in depth but will say this is one of my faves from you.

Absolutely breaking, but I had to get excited after reading your piece because it was so awesome and jammed with that depth and sadness. May I say again how your poetry flows? There are just certain lines that have their own stage, so to speak, I really like how you structure your poems lately, well done.