- this was a wonderful poem .
i could feel the emotion and i overall thouqht itt was very well written .
maybee one or two mistakes but itts still a wonderful write .
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Shivered Autumn
Like restless souls in the sky
With broken thoughts,
I stand here
Damned by your malicious lies
^^^
this was my favourite part ,
itt starts the poem off with deep emotion .

yu are a very good writer , keep itt upp[:

"this enduring love isn't love anymore" Great statment. Also, I really liked your use of words. 5/5 :)

"I said to my graceful lady / "Dry your tears" / Because I won't dry them / For you anymore." Loved these lines! It takes a common tender saying and imbues it with negative connotations...I liked the reversal. I also loved the line "You have burned my tomorrows." Great image!

"Don't cry my love
Don't cry no more"

I like this sentence

I love it emilio
i just feel this powerful emotions that you express here
(don't cry my love)
well done