Meena, the love you have for your husband and your children is always so evident in the poems you write. They are indeed very lucky. Well done.

Loved it! I thought it flowed beautifully. I loved the line that was repeated, such small words with such big meaning. Hope to read more from you. Great work. 5/5

Svandyke

Meena
This is such a awesome form to read. Your poem had a wonderful flow to it. Rolls so easy off the readers tongue.

You hold loves' key to set us free
open the door and come to me
wishes and dreams they wait to flow
spare me a minute you will know

The entire poem is beautiful. I especially liked this stanza.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Beautiful...well written. :)

Such words to describe passion for a loved one are immeasurable. Touching, romantic, and admirable composition. I put it in my favorite's list.

Wonderful Meena!!!