The real religion

by Sean   Jan 24, 2011

Chaos generated order in numbers;
broken dreams through computerized 'no'.
Plastic fantasies turn to accepted travesties,
societies based on nothing but hopeless faith.
Sean, 2011


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  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Sean, this could be taken at least two ways:

    1. The Proto-Entity, Chaos, brought fundamental order to the world through creation of the awareness of distinct manipulable units. Yet the promise this creative force held for substantive civilization is stymied by it's own complexity, leading to triviality replacing the hope for meaning.

    2. Chaos is caused by the degeneration of programed research into mere churned data, signified by disappointment that technology does not provide the easy life, so that we accept far less than we ought to, giving in to despair.

    Odds are you had yet another idea that I haven't caught onto. Well done. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Plastic fantasies turn to accepted travesties

    ^^ Great line this is so true!
    I wish this was longer than one stanza! I really enjoyed it and was hoping you had more to say! I bet if you expanded it it'd be even better!
    True statements! I enjoyed :)