You can't fool me.

by brokenhearted teenage girl   Jan 25, 2011


Save me the heartbreak, I know what your going to do anyways.

Your going to make me think that your different from all the other guys, and that you may actually be the one for me. And then make me love you with all my heart and think that I can't live without you, and next your going to get my hopes and dreams up that were going to have a big future together and everything will be perfect forever . And then next thing you know, you will be shattering my dreams and breaking my heart.

Don't forget *s$h0!33 , I've been played by these games one too many times, I've got them memorized by now.

--rate this, if you've had this happened to you..
& rate/comment if you think it's good, I appericate if you tell me what I can work harder on, thanks!

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  • 13 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    I'm not really good at writing poems, but I will try.
    Thanks alot!

  • 13 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I really liked the idea behind this poem, speaks a lot of truth. You should put it in more of a poem format though and read it that way. Try adding a lil more detail. You really do have some talent, don't let anyone tell you different. Hope to read more by you. 5/5.

    Svandyke