I love how you describe the feeling of being strong sometimes is hard but you have done a great job. I'm glad that now your strong enough to face the situation your in. The emotion behind it is full of courage and braveness. 5/5

Loved the mellow mood in the beginning.
When the mood got stronger I was at the edge of my seat. Beautifully written.

This spoke to my heart. You read my mind.

Thats really sad(...but a good write...not stop:D

It's always a good feeling when you're lucky enough to feel strong and not let anything get in your way!

Nice poem

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Indeed, such a sad piece. I hope you'll be able to combat the unbridled rage and sadness within you through writing.

Take care1

LOVE it, the ones who break us, only make us strong. i like it